Day 7499

Dragon dynasty

1) She gets dragon and breaks arm

1. -World intro steam punk clock tower
2. - Happy setting Inn, wanted poster for Rima and her friends, Tristain charasmatic with maya as she places down a drink
3. -  She ends up in a rapid conversation with him, Intro to main character getting told off// Nicely asks her to finish something
4. - Cleaning see ladies talking, into to emperors quest they also say about how its not safe even in the citys because apparently someone has found a dragon, also hints about the jewel in a newspaper on the side 
5. - Inn keeper explain it to her, and tease her about never queen and also she'll express her want for power and to pay back parents debt - inkeeper we all have our debts to pay 
6. - Night she has a moment where she looks to her parents photo..... Why did you leave me moment on the side is a newspaper with a cup of tea on top, the newspaper also has the jewel info and about bandits going around from town to town , there is also the note about becoming in charge 
7. - Wrenched out of bed - room is ransacked, 
8. - Standing with everyone else cue some bloody scenes with animals, - Gold, paintings, food all piled up in caravans, 
9. - Inkeeper is being paid and given a horse, First person one of the ladies from before is about to be eaten, Heroic act, completely fails, to prove the place they feed her first, but she manages to escape from inside it's stomach using her mechanical arm
10. - Start to loose consciousness as blood pools around her 
11. - People start to panic more so, fire is everywhere
12. - Her body being dragged away into the shadows 

 2) She meets mechanic man 

1. Mechanical forest setting, show her inside of the tree glass tree, have a mechanical spider crawl over her arm and she goes to move it away 
2. Basic mechanical arm now shown, also chains, as she is inspecting it show shadow figure in background that comes into focus, Tristain charasmatic
3. She goes to speak and he comes in close and pulls her shirt up around her throat . "Technically, the last thing I want to do is hurt you.... But it’s still on the list... So no talking now." Takes off glasses and cleans them on her collar 
4. She, looking over his shoulder and seeing skeletons and such head buts him, he gets knocked out for a little bit, she grabs the keys (in an almost drunk state) and unlocks herself, and then chains him up (Upon touching him, she starts getting random facts of information floating around in her brain)
5. Whole double page of all the random information entering her brain - include rima the revloutionist and the rose gem and basic mechanics/healing
6. "" 
7. Starts looking round, finds books on anatomy, and mechanics and jars of human parts, and not so human parts, she also finds things on dragons, notices her waist has been bandaged, hands float over coins and then go towards a diary,  
8. She is sitting in a chair drinking tea reading his diary when he wakes up,  and walks over to him "technically, the last this I want to do is hurt you...Again... But it's still on the list so uh.. start talking now or I'll spread all your secrets to everyone" (take it from the above text box//pull what he said down and scribble it out) he replies, "oh like you can read?"
9. "Yes, Tristain" I can "So do most people in this world, not everyone just skims through life looking at pictures" (look at reader raising an eye brow her back to him he is undoing himself using the mechanical spiders,  "technically a nice cup of tea would make this a little easier, yes?" Says the Mechanic as he rubs his hands   
10. (Why did I turn away) internal thoughts of Maya mouth slightly open as she turns around, He is in kitchen and opens the curtains and you see the sky going past so he's like "as you can see I professor Tristain , Thay" am owner of this rather lovely moving vessel and this... Curtains open 
11. "Is technically not where we want to be..."Jaw slack, large city about to crash into, he starts pouring the water for the tea "Oh my,,,"  
12. Still trying to drink tea, and fix everything in the control room, last panel them about to crash into outer wall of Sygnette and a baby dragon flies onto the windscreen trying to get to Maya 

3) She gets her arm fixed, the French story is introduced and eye candy enters the party, baby dragon starts following Maya

1. Jacque and Lissette are in the mechanic shop, being all sexy and lovey dovey and whispering names to each other etc. 
2. Someone crashes into the shop saying about the crash out side of town, the words are half jumbled and in the next shot they are gone with the words following them out the door.
3. Jaque squints at the word bubbles and then sighs, as Lissete kisses him on the cheek and slips away 
4. Jaque shows up on a horse and cart (now with glasses), with all manner of odds and ends and now he's scratching his chin and looking at all the debris and rubble, have the smoke from the final shot be drifting through all three previous ones 
5. Tristain and Maya emerge from the wreck, Maya's arm has become unhinged and Tristain has several pieces of glass sticking out of him (under nails, and in eyeballs) his mechanical structure underneath is now showing with half his face peeling away, Maya holding her side the stitches loose and she's bleeding again.  
6. Tristain notes Jacque and Leo in the crowd of gawking humans "Oh how kind of you to meet us" "sorry about all this mess" Takes a sip of tea from his now very broken tea cup. Maya is rubbing her mechanical arm that is hanging and broken, a few sparks fly out 
7. "Jacque my dear be a good man and help this one up for me , pushing Maya forwards  " Technically not much you can do for the brain but the arm should be simple enough, and just tighten those stitches" he leans in to say in a false whisper and drops some coins into Jacques hand. He goes to embrace Leo, then stops just as he's about to touch him reconsidering, he looks at the fine suit and says "ah aren't you well dressed, Ball tonight?" Leo looks back astonished "Any luck with the pirates? No? Well anyway I'll see you there" He walks off his parts sparking. (No one else has said anything and all are speechless) 
8. Jacque raises his fists and shouts after Tristain "If I were you I'd" *CLANG* Maya was messing with stuff in the cart trying to fix herself and many things fall out. Leo puts his hand on Jacques shoulder "Have f-f-fun ;) ) 
9. Evening at the castle with lots of carts outside, Jacque detailing next Lissette how he'd had to work on Mayas arm and give her a dress and then a dragon had started chasing her when she'd left the shop and how it was all so Bizzar. With Lissette putting make up on in sexy Lingerie (they just had sex kinda bed in background and stuff, a few tissues some sweat patches both half naked) 
10. "Bang" on the door and Lissette hides Jacque away. Leo opens the door and seeing Lissette smiles. "Ah.. Soon we are to be married" he saunters over and pulls her in close hands groping her butt. He smells the oil from Jacque and notes the evidence on the bed, pulling her in and holding her by her throat. "You know, I'm willing to oversee your many lovers, I think your experience is a charm, but this will not continue!" She try s to deny but he grabs her outside. 
11. Holding her out over the balcony of many dancing people below, by the throat, "You may not love me but you will obey, obey..." "understand?" She is clawing blood out of his hands but it doesn't work, she looks down to the great fall below and meekly nods yes. He smiles and lets go "I'm glad we have an understanding" Pulling her back up onto the balcony 
12. Switch to Maya and Tristain. (general chatter in background of a grand jewel being transported on the glass train) Maya is sneaking out of the ballroom (In background you see the two of them up in the balcony with Lissette hanging out still) She reaches a horse and is about to steal it when a dragon fly's up behind her. "Technically that is stealing you know?" from Tristan "It's borrowing to get away from that thing" Final shot is a cute image of the Dragon drooling a little and licking it's lips.

 4) They decide to rob a train and the gun girl enters the story

1. Maya and Tristain are arguing and the horse runs off, the dragon looks at it sadly, then a carriage hurtles towards them
2. Lissette and Tristain and riding hard in the carriage trying to escape, but see the people standing in the road and have to come to a hard stop. They shout at them for being in the way and whilst that happens the horse disappears and the dragon becomes rather fat....Dragon is fat and has eaten the escape horse used by Lissette and Jaque, Tristain witty remark
3. Dragon burps up a few bones. Jacque fixes up the carriage to the dragon and they start to fly away but it's slow going and Leo is catching up to them on the distance, Lissette simply explains that she has to leave! 
4. I'll see you at the city of towers - Jacque and they fly away into the moonrise. the angry mob held at bay by an explosion Jacque sets of. 
5. Awkward moment of staring at each other not saying much, awkward conversations 
6. Montage of day break, with them going lower and lower you can see the train, the dragon looks super worn out 
7. They pull up by the train and just as it's about to leave, landing on top, Maya scrabbles and undoes the dragons bindings to which it flys off into the distance..."good riddance?" only to hear a click as someone pulls a gun on her (this happens just as she undoes the last strap with a "Stop") 
8. She turns around and see's sky pirates ontop of the train, three others plus Rima "You get that dragon back here" Maya holds up her arms and is all like "Give me a break " she notes where Tristan is, and using the mechanical arm pushes him into them
9. He falls and grabs onto them, she ducks as one of the other pirates guns goes off and see it embedded into her arm, the others are dazed from touching him, all grabbing their heads, Rima is the last one standing, as Rima turns to look at her friends Lissette grabs the gun and pulls her arm back behind her, the coat she is wearing opens up a little revealing that she's still in the lingerie from earlier   
10. She fishes in Rimas jacket and starts throwing guns and then a jewel onto the floor, chucking it over to Maya, she finds a crumpled up picture of a Rima and is all like oh, hey Rima, so what you doing on the train then?
11. Was planning on stealing this and making a quick get away till you guys wrecked out transport out, Lissete pulls out a big shiny red button , Rima is all like O.O Don't push it!!!! 
12. Question to the viewers. Push the button? Yes or No,   

5) There is a house that burns and peoples ties are put to strain

1. If yes, the train blows up and they all fall into a lake/hot spring with rubble falling down if no then Rima takes the button and explains everything, she then joins the party, 
2. no = they go down collect parachutes and escape, yes = they wash up on the sure, a very bedraggled Rima saying "I told you not to push that button -.-''" Reveal a  birthing scar over her stomach , tristain witty remark
3. They walk up to the house and Maya checks everywhere, Lissette is like what are you doing? And Maya says "Ever since I read that note things keep happening, it's like I've become the main character for some messed up plot" "Don't worry dear you don't really look like a main character" Rima knocks on the door and it swings inwards "creepy"(may be too self reference)  
4. They go inside and realise no one is there, they all dry off and get a fire going, huddling in some blankets that are found. Tristain starts making some food from a crate that landed and they all sit down at a table and eat Maya still looking sketchy, Lissette now in a dress, Rima having retrieved her gun is now cleaning it, Tristain is reading through a map they start drinking and then explain each others storys, each one becoming more exaggerated and one upy from the other as they get more and more drunk  
5. Tristain explains about how he is on a quest for knowledge and how Maya crashed his island with her dragon "Technically you are in charge of that dragon you know, what with it eating you and all" 
6. Rima explains about how her team mates left her, the dragon landed on the escape route hatch destroying it , and her now dead friends, how she'll never see her son again  
7. Lissette briefly goes into the psychopathic husband to be and how he threatened to kill her, how she can't be with the one she loves  
8. And Maya..Just mumbles about wanting to be rich to pay of her parents debts .... Lissette snorts and says she defiantly isn't the main character they all become good friends by the end of it 
9. Rima and Maya get very close, with Rima comforting Maya, Rima kisses Maya and Maya blushes and gets all startled and says she's going to get some water, Lissette laughs and says it's probably her first kiss, Rima says "her?" And Lisstte and Tristain just look at her like O.o well yeah duh.... "Fair enough," she says touching lips her lips with a quirky smile 
10. Maya grabs some water and see's the dragon outside, she tries to shoo it away but it keeps coming back, the dragon huhs a small fire and she quickly puts it out with the water, "bad dragon!"  she heads back inside and locks the door 
11. She gets back to the room and everyone is asleep, so she adds a little more wood to the fire , and falls asleep 
12. She wakes up in a cold sweat, saying she thought that the house would be on fire or soemthing to test their ties, the others look at her bemused and say come on, there is an oasis near here we can go get some food and such! They head off into the sunrise  

 6) She is in a market and has a conflict with the prince

1. Make it to the oasis 
2. Gets all dressed up by Lissette, Tristan is charasmatic 
3. wanders off then hears prince saying shit
4. Conflicts against him telling him to shut up 
5. She walks off then he realises who she is 
6. Chase seen 
7. Rides dragon away from him and make it back to her friends 
8. They get the map and start towards the city via underground 
9. old skeleton scares Lissette and she drops the map 
10. They wander aimlessly
11.  Dragon gets hungry and looks like its about to eat them and  Maya manages to get it to go find out 
12. Dragon makes out of a flying whole they have no way to get out 

1. Shes about to run away// he grabs her hand// her head crashes into the wall "well aren't you just the little escapist"// 
2.  Her eyesight blurred slightly you see it from her pov // She slaps him revealing the tattoo of magic ness on his head // he glares at her and grabs her hand, " And a violent one at that"
3.  She is walking happily carrying the food close to her chest shadow person in foreground// a man rushes past her // making her spill her food  it falls out the panels
4. He pins her arm above her head and leans in closely "stop drawing attention to us, or else" // Show her look of utter fear but looking really cute at the same time, her mouth frozen slightly open as if about to scream she glances from side to side // Some people run past on the other side " can you see him? Where did he go?"
5.  He grabs her chin // kisses her // her eyes wide as she goes to slap him again 
6.  he pulls away and grabs her second hand in one move // "don't" he looks all glaring and staring at her // Show her slumped against the wall eyes shut closed, half hidden in the street light, some people running off in the distance
7.  He falls to the ground a small pool of blood the girl just stands close eyed // she opens her eyes and begins to run away // then looks over her shoulder a worried expression..*Muttering under her breath*"Are you....Okay" 
8.  Sweat drips of the man's nose his face mostly hidden by his hair, his lipped turned into a vicious smile "Just peachy... now *Pants* run a long would you?I'm a little busy" // She looks back towards the light once more then sighs // turning back to the man she rips some of her skirt and wraps it around his bleeding arm. 
9. The man looks at her, teeth gritted " are you insane?" // she runs a hand through her damp hair "probably..." // She uses a potion on him, which she had bought for herself and her side now healing but still somewhat pained. 

 7) She reaches the kingdom everything is almost going to plan

1. Tristain was picking up mechanics and makes an elevator to get out 
2. They enter the city of towers, Tristan is witty
3. Guards surround them and her dragon is caught under traps, tristain goes to push down arrow but they are caught with nets 
4. Rima trys to shoot and Lissette pulls out some kick ass moves, they end of with black eyes and are knocked out  
5. Dragged into the audience chamber, everyone is in chains, they try and get her to prove that the dragon won't hurt them
6. fat king claps and says wonderful! you have passed the first test 
7. They relax and go out drinking, Jaque finds Lissette and they are all lovey dovey 
8. Rui finds out about Tristain and how he has mechanics and starts being all interested in them 
9. They are all summoned and explained about the quest
10. Maya flys off on the dragon with one of the guards to see the silken city 
11. As she flys off Leo makes it to the city with his mechanical dragon 
12. Leo and Lissette find each other, and Leo claims to want the Kingdom intimidating the king

8) The king puts trials in her way 

- Spiders (Isaac) Giant fury mountain, assumed to be moss, they touch it and it's just tons and tons and fricken tons of spiders. Inside is boss rock spider who has a silk armour thing they need to get for the king. or dress oor yes...
- Rima is resting under a tree, having been fighting to earn money for her son to eat (he's around 2 and has a tough build)  She gives her son away only so that he might have a better life and vows to change the world in turn. Thus she becomes the revolutionist.

1. Rima a lot younger resting under a tree cleaning her weapons, she has a small pile of coins in a music box beside her, and a young boy runs forward from behind the bushes 
2. She is about to raise her knife to him then realizes who it is and relaxes, he looks a little scared/embarrassed  but then runs up and hugs her, she strokes his hair, and looks to the coins
3. Jacques fetch some bread, be quick and get a good price okay? He nods and runs off, she sighs and shuts the lid to the coins 
4. As Jacques runs into the market everyone is sneering and turning away from him, he goes up to buy bread and the seller gives him the stale stuff quickly cutting off the mold before handing it to him for a few coins, Jacques notices that the table is sagging and fixes it with some random objects around,
5. shop keeper looks surprised and gives him the bread for free, murmuring clever boy or something, as he got the bread for free he looks to the sweets/toys section, but then turns his attention to some bandages and healing salves and buys that instead. 
6.  He returns to find rima talking to some nobles, he puts down the items as she comes back and brushes him off, handing him her last few coins in the wooden music box, she squeezes him and says she wants him to stay with the nice people always polite and she makes him promise her, then she watches as he goes away in the carriage  
7. Dragon arrives at the silken city, mayas like okay lets land on the mountain, as they get closer she realizes it's not a mountain but lots of spiders, she's like oh shit not rock not rock, but it's too late and the dragon and her are sucked in under the spidery outside 
8.  corpse hangs out with a cross bow that she gingerly takes, looking at the dragon that judges her and shes like whaaaat, she puts her hand on one of the glowing mushrooms and it oozes, dragon gives her another look 
9. shes about to chastise again but then dragon takes her around the corner and they narrowly avoid a spider, but the spider webs get in the dragons nose and he sneezes creating a fire, she has to use one of the glowing mushrooms to put out the fire....and they are left in darkness
10.  See her eyes in the dark...This time glaring at dragon...She starts heading up and then BAM nice opening shot show off all the city and spider legs etc. Meets the boss - Audience decide, sing for it, burn it, talk to it, fight it with the cross bow, offer the dragon to it for it to eat, she says now what? Looking straight to camera   
11.  Audience decision happens epicness ensues 
12. Triumphant leaving the city, on the dragon heading back into the city of towers, the dress/Armour flying through the air, some threads coming of off it as it flies (yes it's going to arrive in tatters)  

Lissette's parents whilst travelling come across the child, her mother is heavily pregnant and they choose to take him in as a bodyguard/servant of sorts. As he grows they realise his talent and encourage his inventive ways. 

9) The characters start to fall for the wrong people

1. Leo and king are discussing, leo trying to persuade him to let him rule, explains he has a mechanical dragon which fits what was asked, that he would make a wonderful ruler etc. etc. Rui sitting calmly sipping tea, quirky remarks that show all the flaws in Leos plans. 
2. Maya arrives back at the city arriving in garden, her hair grown out, covered in threads from the gown which is now in tatters. She notices the king eating a cake with some ladies/Leo directly infront and laughs, ah well yes, my leige - and she bows handing over the silk dress. Cake drops from the kings mouth. 
3. He quickly recovers and then looks at the dress, well that simply will not do. Be away with you, I'll think of something else, and take that rubbish with you.  Maya walks away rolling her eyes, bringing the dragon with her, restraining it from eating the humans and muttering how she should have wrapped it. 
4. King leans over to Leo and says, well...I can't have "her" in charge, hushed whispers ensue. Rui puts down her tea frowning slightly. 
5. Maya brings the tattered dress back to the room and Lissette forces her to wear it, stitching it up with a bit of silk from where it had become slightly too reveiling, Lissette has just the right shade of lipstick to go with it and says she will be right back! Hurrying away. Knock on the door, Maya says enter thinking it's Lis and Leo enters saying the king has asked for her. Is taken about by Mayas beauty, miner stammer. 
6. Maya notices Lissette behind him and as he's about to turn she stands and falls to the floor, dress ripping somethwat, Leo stays look at Maya and helps her up, "I'll uh...Just get changed" thanks you... Lissette has rushed away and leo apologieses and says he'll wait outside. 
7. King reveals a long long scroll with 5 plants drawn intricatly and showing where it is on a mountain, insists she must gather the plants before noon and she may not use the dragon but must rely on her own strength. Lissete gives her a potion that will help her "keep going"  
8. Starts hiking up the mountain, stunning view of the city, notice how the towers and rock sides don't seem awefully stable, gets to the cave and finds a couple of the plants (already had the glowing mushroom plant from the spider cavern) Sun is still high and she sighs, looking up the winding path... still so far to go, mini montage of gathering next to bird nest and bird chasing her, diving into a pool and having seeweed/merman 
9. Cut to her at the top of the mountian in a cave, gathering the last plant and crossing it off her list.Shadow figure looking and waiting for her to fall in trap but she misses. She looks at the sky and sighs better be heading back looking exhausted, takes a swig of the potion that Lissette gave her and starts getting swooshy, blames it on the tiredness,  figure catches her from behind and drags her away. 
10. Puts up a fight but then is blindfolded and falls, onto some rope which was a trap set up that she didn't fall into last time. Is blindfolded, gagged and has hands tied, she realises they are walking down and starts "hearing" her surroundings. Underground? No one digs underground in this city.
11. Is finally unblindfollded and tied to a chair, inside cave, small stream running through, old civiliaztion area with stone bed and table etc. Blurry image of leo, she says she's going to be sick and he reluctently unties her, she is sick and he pats her back, she goes to hit him but is too weak, starts throwing up again this time all over him. 
12. He ties her to a makeshift bed, and when she wakes up she is partially naked/so is he with their clothes hanging up drying, fire crackeling, Leo snoozing in a chair. Still feeling sick but now able to move she goes towards the water and finds a sword at her throat. 

Upon not finding her, her companions search everywhere. Lissette happened to find out about the abduction but not wanting to be tied to Leo and seeing it as a good way for peace doesn't tell anyone. Jacque notices something wrong and presses for details but to no avail.
 10) The dragon almost kills everyone 

When Mayas dragon goes wild at her disappearance and starts destroying the city the emperor is forced to ask Leo to retrieve Maya.
Jaque being the brillient inventor that he is when faced with Leo's mechanical dragon thinks he can escape, ignoring her warning. In the attack at first he is doing well but then suffers a critical hit. He is heavily wounded and dies from blood loss.Where he died Lissette turns the place into a garden and vows to never love again. 

11) ending part 1 Leo obliges but not before tricking her into a contract where she can go and save the city but she is then tied to him for 6 months of the year. // Lissette notices Mayas feelings for Leo and pressures them to stay together.   
12) ending part 2 o.o
Upon his death he is turned into a blank character. When Maya hears of this she breaks out the panels and tries to draw him back in but can't get it right. Many versions of him appear and they all combine into a ghost image, he tells Lissette he loves her but to move on, says his goodbyes and then lives inside one of the flowers.

Day 7498

Seeker 

1) Underwater home invaded

1. World intro zoom into caverns 
2. Party seen everyone dancing drinking someone calls over to Keyara 
3. She laughs and continues to play harp in the roof smiling and waving 
4. Someone crashes in and there is blood, everything goes quiet 
5. Torchlight fills the caverns and everyone evacuates into the underwater cavern, she closes it from the outside 
6. She hides up in the canopy of spikes and see's the rest of her people killed as the fighters try and fight back
7. Tears blur her vision, and she remains hidden as the men settle down and start drinking, her arms start to grow shaky and so she decides to run for it 
8. She is just about to escape, hiding in the shadows as someone walks past, then as she makes a run for it Seeker catches her by her hair 
9. He says the party's over and drags her up onto the ship keeping her as a prize with all the men jeering at her and filing onto the ship 
10. As one goes past she grabs a knife of a passing man and cuts her hair to be released from the grip then aims it at the rest of the group who slowly circle around her 
11. She lunges for Seeker and manages to cut his hand as he uses it to block her attack, his white blood turns to crystals as it bleeds out, she shows her fangs at him snarling. distracted she is knocked out by another crew member 
12. She is tied to the mast as punishment but a storm comes and breaks it and she is flung into the water.

2) Transform and Time skip 

1. Beautiful beach scene, you see some foot prints in the sand, then a girl has washed up 
2. Her body is all cut up and there is black smoke rising from her wounds, you see Sonar make a it can't be helped face with an inner monologue of what if someone see's me helping her, in the end he shrugs and picks her up 
3. She wakes up next to a camp fire, there is seaweed salves on her wounds and she see's Sonar approaching , he asks her questions and she answers with her name and that's all she can say as she is too disorientated,  he removes the salves and starts licking the wounds, she recoils her arm away but realises the wound has gone.
4. He pins her and licks all of her wounds away and he kisses her, transforming her into a normal girl as he sucks all the black out of her.
5. Years later she is travelling with friends (Older 22 now) and they are on a horse and cart journey her name is now Keira and they chat about the new jobs they will get over seas, One of the girls is reading a book on demons and they are in nuns outfits in training 
6. The wheel in the cart juts and get's stuck breaking, Keyara looks down at it and says she will go on to get help, checking her watch and saying they have time, she is about to leave when Sonar, also older comes riding 
7. They have a bit of banter and he being a gentlemen offers to give them a helping hand, other girls with Keyara all giggle and comment on how hansom he is 
8. They go together to the port and race along the road,  until they reach the port (under a cliff view) 
9. They enter port and Keyara is all newbie and enjoying the smells and tastes, Sonar guides her to a carpenter, she has a moment where she blanches looking over the edge of the pier down at the sea. 
10. They enter the carpenter and it turns out that her purse had a hole in it and the coins have been dropped the whole way (you can see this if you look back in the panels), sonar saves the day and pays for her 
11. They have a seen of all the girls at port on the same cliff and it's the beautiful seen, and Keyara pays Sonar back with an apple pie she's made 
12. Only to see the ship they are meant to have boarded leaving off in the distance. 

3) They miss the ship so Sonar helps them, she finds out he's a demon

1. She drops the bags in frustration and runs her hands through her hair, saying about how the next ship is in the following month, she looks at her pocket watch and realises it's the same time as when the carriage broke, Sonar offers them a lift, to which all the others girls are like OMG YAS and Keira is like O.o...Well thanks but no thanks
2. She is drowned out and they are waiting in the tavern Keira mumbling over drink about they shouldn't be going, he has bought them alcoholic drinks and they are all a bit tipsy, Keira more than most. Her friends Leora and Trissa (Gender bent versions of Leo and Tristain) are tapping her on the shoulder and remaining about how they will be able to get jobs and explore etc. 
3. Night comes and they are all a little tired, Sonar wakes up Keira who had fallen asleep the two other girls were playing cards, and make a fuss about how she was about to win and Sonar gently says that the boat will wait for no humans 
4. They leave and are dragging their bags towards the dockyard, then look up to see a gigantic ship, their is a rope bridge leading up and two men carry her bag, she rushes on up after her bag and then reaches the top and realises there is also a gangplank to get onto the inner ship
5. The world goes fuzzy and fear starts to take keira, the other girls swaddle past and say it's perfectly fine, and call her to take their hand but she is frozen solid and everything appears as if under water and they are drowning. 
6. Sonar slings her over his shoulder and carries her across saying time to go, when he puts her down on the other side he rubs his shoulders where she was digging her nails in, he pops her down in one of the rooms and tells them this is their room for the journey and they must stay inside as it's not safe on deck. 
7. Keira not having a chance to thank him and wanting to apologise about the clawing sneaks out when the moon is covered and it is mostly dark, She looks around the ship and see's some interesting crew people, then finally hears his voice saying good night to them and saying these three aren't like the others 
8. She sneaks up unto his room, and is about to knock but then the door opens inwards, just as a moon beam appears and them BAM there is Sonar with black smoke coming out of the wound she gave him and tattoos all over his body  which is mostly topless and she's like...D-d-demon o.o?
9. He drags her inside and slams the door shut complaining about the stupid lock not working and quickly putting a top on, then spinning round and saying why the hell is she out here? and she is like all shocked and says she's so sorry and makes to go 
10. But he's all like oh no, now you've seen, promise me you won't say about this to anyone and she nervously promises but he doesn't believe her so he grabs her hand and starts dragging her out towards the mast 
11. I'll tie you to the top of here if you say a word to anyone and by this point she is pulling and making him bleed more and there is black smoke coming out and his eyes are glowing a dull red and she breaks down sobbing and he has to support her from falling down and he whispers he's sorry and why didn't she just stay in her room.
12. Then more ship mates join them and Sonar turns cold, this one tried to escape lock her and her friends up in the outer ship, her and her friends are taken to cages with many other girls and animals and people all in chains that are sleeping, they all try and fight and she ends up with a split lip and black eye and once chained they drug her and she falls asleep. Pirate and they steal the women and ships contents over to the mountain city.

4) Keeps Keyara~ 

1. Waking up, groggily in the room, complaining about head, starts to get up and explores  
2. All of the people have been handed in - Sonar to Seeker, Seeker dismisses him 
3. Looks for a way to escape, finds some drawings of her, gets woozy from looking out the window  
4. There's someone coming and grabs a knife from the food tray, Trying to attack  when he comes back 
5. You're finally awake! We've met before, you've been asleep for a long time I hid you from the rest (He looks a little older) oh put the knife down Keyara 
6. Then Sonar is like, I've kept some things from you, I sealed your powers when you were younger, you have scratches all over your body... I'm sorry I couldn't save more than just you...  You're friends...They... They were got to... But I couldn't let them find out what you were...Stay here and I'll go find them... Just don't go anywhere
7.  Yeah... Sure .... Exploring - hope it'll go better this time, see it through the searcher spider in last panel
8.  Seeker notices through the searcher spiders and "accidentally" bumps into her 
9.  She tries to play it cool "Thinking oh damn he's cute, this really isn't the time for that brain >.>..." and brushes hair out of her eyes, she hasn't got the mark, how did you get in here jazz he takes her hand and she blushes like >.>... Um.. But then he digs his thumb into her and her blood comes out and some of it smokes.... 
10. She runs away and he just watches her go.then starts typing stuff into a wrist band and sends a spider after him.....
11. She ends up back in the room holding a knife and thinking Sonar was seeker goes to stab him, Sonar just disarms her like come on we did this a few pages back, I said I'd show you your friends but you have to be quiet, then he notices her hand and says about how the process reverses over time... and she lies about having seeker cut it 
12. They crawl along a secret passage and she see's her friends ,they have scars on their hands and she has a moment of realisation, Keyara calls out to them and they look at her like they don't recognise her... Then shrug and hug her and one whispers "get out whilst you can" 

5) Sonar breaks a rule by doing this as she is meant to belong to the city not one person/She cuts him by mistake and his black blood is revealed to on of Seekers searcher spiders.

1. Show how the rule system works 
2. Happy memory 
3. Show magnitude  of the city 
4. How he can't help her 
5. He starts making plans for her and her friends to escape on his next travels 
6. Shows her maps of the underground passages 
7. Takes her to a secret hideout 
8. Tell her about her demon blood and cuts/bites her hand to show her he can activate it 
9. Reason that she cuts him  in return is to see 
10. Reveal to search spiders, were spying the whole time and Seeker noties them
11. They start to head back but are surrounded by guards, they don't understnad so go along with it 
12. She is captured in chains and taken away 

6) Seeker and Sonar dual, Sonar loses and dies. Because of the rules in the duel Seeker now "owns" Keyara

1. Announcer shows her standing on a podium, blinding lights cover her and you see the large crowd around the fighting pit below 
2. Two people about to fight the announcer still booming over them, stand out style 
3. Back to Keyara trying to escape, the swords drag in the sand as they circle one another 
4. Fight 
5. Fight 
6. Loose the sword/footing 
7. Keyara manages to break the chains by tipping the chair, starts climbing down towards them 
8. Seeker is about to kill him just as she reaches the ground, they say last words to each other 
9. Full page Sonar death, stabbed through the heart - gore sprays everywhere and the black smoke rises 
10. Seeker warns Keyara to step back once she pushes past he strikes her across the back and upper arms , he notices that her back blood is black and starting to smoke so pushes her down and grabs her face shouting into it that it's all her fault 
11. Everyone else files out, he picks her up and wipes away the gore dragging her to a room, he chucks her in Sonars old room and locks the door.  
12. He pins her down and apply the poltice and bandages her up "what are you"   

7) In the Same arena the next day Seeker fights Keyara (Testing scene) He trains her to be a warrior alongside her cleaning. After she was ambushed by people mad about Sonars death.

1. She enters looking haggard having had no sleep at all, escorted by two guards, looks at the black blood stain and averts her eyes, she has no will, be back and upper arms have been bandaged  
2. Seeker is training with the master swordsman Glistening in sweat, he stops to take a breather and hand gestures them to say words 
3. Continues impossible flips and such Soldier reports the tests that took place over night basic rpg stats, seeker circles around them slowly getting closer getting caught up in the fight
4. The guards move in front to protect her from the fight and she starts noticing the escape routes 
5. She runs full sprint, at first they don't notice, then they do and start chasing after her 
6. Seeker throws the dagger and it skims through her hair, ripping the page,  
7. She uses it to jump and starts hanging there as they run towards her 
8. She pulls herself up and starts heading towards the doors her back is bleeding again (red)) 
9. They make it up there and corner her, against a door 
10. One of the guards takes some rope and whips it out catching her, pulling her close and tying her off, she sits down and her blood starts trickling onto the floor she spits at seekers feet
11. He slaps her, eye level lecture about the city and then sends her away 
12. She gets taken and becomes branded. 

8) Seeker shows her the rooftop balcony and slowly she gets over her fear. Stockholm syndrome ensues.

1. wriggles out of the bonds and , Gingerly looks at the branding, then starts to search for the mouse 
2. Notices the breeze from one direction , Goes to his room and breaks one of the mechanical spiders as it runs for the door when she opens it, and searches for the mouse, 
3. She grits her teeth, then hears someone coming so hides by the door, mouse now in hands  
4. Tense moment as seeker enters and she runs away, she runs towards the exit feet bare feet slapping along the ground, 
5. Seeker has a moment to realize, look of confusion, looking at the spider, then to were the mouse was, then it clicks, he is at the door looking left to right, you see him leave broken spider twitching
6. Her face is full of light, and she is smiling, feet running faster, mountain view 
7. moment of O.O as she almost topples over the edge. looking down to see a rather steep drop, she starts to fall off
8.  as she is falling seeker,he starts to come to the entrance, she is falling, he spreads his arms andjumps down 
9. Catches her in his wings, and you get another shot of the landscape, moving quickly and then they adjust  brief moment of staring into one anothers eyes 
10. then he touches the burn and shes like ow and hes like oh shut up//she sees the slavers mark on him, maybe the wings ripped of the page 
11. he explains everyone is a slave here, and if she tries hard enough maybe shell get her own wings, though first she has to work off breaking the spider and the wall  
12. he lands back, drops the mouse on her head and walks away , sun setting in the distance  

9) Just as everything is going "okay" Sonar returns from the dead/ has enough power to affect the real world and destroys seekers searcher spiders. He knows about the past and has watched as they grew closer. He forces seeker to explain the truth and horrified Keyara runs away, when he catches up to her she full on fights him and tries to kill him, he has to retaliate.

1. "okay montage random interactions between seeker and keyara throughout, mildly monotonous, in a cave down below and black swirling mist starts to form throughout the pages", fighting cooking cleaning eating, 
2. starts to notice the seeker spiders and the bar codes everywhere, get's to know some people, 
3. wins at 'chess', see's seeker working on spiders, cooking,
4.  cleaning, eating, fighting - warned something is out there , 
5. see's seeker working on spiders he notices her, wins game again this time wins money, more barcodes, 
6. goes to open space and thinks about wings and the spiders,  uses money to buy parts and a new dress, 
7. fighting, seeker invites to work on things explains somethings breaking them, they create a mecha bird together  
8. eating, fighting with bird, bird flies off on it's own her and seeker follow 
9. leads to dark caverns and there is sonar, all dark and gloomy, and then she starts to hear him and runs off 
10.  chasing after the voice twists and turns  this mechanical bird sitting on his fingers bits of scrap metal all around, and you just see keyaras face utter confusion and a little bit teary 
11. she goes to hug him and he embraces her, but then it's all sinister and he's like how could you do that with my brother and then he breaks the bird and causes  it to be super sharp and holds it to her throat and he murmurs in her don't worry I won't hurt you but don't struggle accidents happen 
12. seeker enters and then sonar is like uh uh not another step or I'll hurt her, I think you have some explaining to do brother,  dramatic posing ensues 

10) He catches her and locks her away. In the darkness Sonar comes and asks her if she wants to be a demon again. She accepts and has a fever, because she is ill they release her. When she awakens she is full of power and meets Seeker once again in the dueling ground.

11) They fight and she's about to kill him just like he killed Sonar but instead spares him like he spared her.

12) She released all the slaves and creates a great bridge so people can come and go as they please not being trapped, then she leaves.

Day: 7245

12 Levels of the game, 12 chapters in the comic

1. City of Wings - Floating steampunk city 
2. Mechanical forest - Moving across the land 
3. Center french city -  Many rivers running through it, everything is controlled and pristine "perfect" 
4. Train - that is super high up and made of glass that travels from area to area 
5. Kingdom of fire and smoke - everything is long and spindly and covered in ashe/sand
6. Oasis market - Which you reach through a cloud of mist has lots of waterfalls but the sky is covered from the ashe. Floating embers from the fire and hanging lights provided make it look like night all the time. 
7. Underground city of towers - Use magic to create impossible buildings that reach through the roof and into the world above 
8. Silken palace - The highest of the towers but long abandoned hidden under 1000's and 1000's of small crawling black spiders. Pristine and white and ends in covering a large tree with random threads blowing off into the wind very high up in the clouds 
9. Clouds - insane winds with giant glass birds that fly just out of sight but cast their shadows and refract light like rainbows through the air 
10. Under world - Great lake, glow in the dark jellyfish like souls that will drag you under if you get caught. Extremely cold and though you can walk on the water every step you take leaves a little fragment of yourself behind as you freeze yourself a path. There is a tower in the center of the lake with frozen bodies making a stairway to the open window in the tower that is letting a sing stream of daylight into the place
11. Space - Looking down on Rythum it shrinks to the palm of your hand and you gain the title "Ruler of Rythum" 
12. Space - Same.... 

I think what I'll do is make this concept art on photoshop to use in the comic and what not and then make low poly versions of it to use in the story game thing. 

Day 7144

Keyara, Seeker,Sonar

1.  Underwater home invaded, as a trophy she's tied to mast only to be stormed away.
2. Sonar transforms her, time skip, they meet again by broken carriage
3. They miss the ship so Sonar helps them, she finds out he's a demon
4. She's his personal maid
5. Seeker finds out, the revalidation and duel
6. Duel
7. Starts training Keyara
8. Shows rooftop balcony, helps her overcome her fear, stockholm syndrome
9. Sonar returns from dead explains everything to Keyara, she tries to kill Seeker in return - Fails
10. Chained up, accepts demon offer, becomes ill during transformation
11. Attacks Seeker, almost kills him, makes him free everyone
12. Re shapes the mountain so everyone can go as they please then travels the world.


1) Keyara home underwater party, she's on the outside. Invaded by Seeker, she watches many of her people die and tries to escape, as she sneaks out he catches her dragging her by her hair onto the boat as a trophy.  She manages to grab a knife and cuts her hair then aims the knife at the crew but is surrounded and knocked out.  They tie her to the top of the mast as punishment. A storm comes and the mast breaks, she falls into the water and because of her race doesn't drown o.o

2) She washes up on a beach and Sonar finds her, all of her body is covered in cuts that are bleeding black smoke blood. She is in a daze and doesn't fully recognize what is happening as Sonday licks her wounds healing her she is chewing on her lip. He kisses her transforming her into an ordinary girl then takes her to an orphanage. Years later she is traveling with friends to a new job overseas but the coach wheel breaks.  Sonar rides past and seeing the girls in trouble offers to help Keyera joins him on the horse and they fetch a spare wagon from the port.

3) The delay means they miss the ship and Sonar offers them a trip on his she (Ship within a ship) Keyara is so scared she can't cross the gang plank onto the ship so he carries her. He tells the women not to leave their rooms but not having an opportunity during the day she decides to sneak out at night. She see's the demon tattoos all over his body and he threatens her to keep silent, he doesn't believe she will and so drags her to the mast and say's he'll tie her at the top to which she breaks down sobbing in ears and he has to support her. Turns out he's a pirate and they steal the women and ships contents over to the mountain city.

4) He keeps Keyara as his personal maid so she is always close by and won't tell anyone.

5) Sonar breaks a rule by doing this as she is meant to belong to the city not one person/She cuts him by mistake and his black blood is revealed to on of Seekers searcher spiders.

6) Seeker and Sonar dual, Sonar loses and dies. Because of the rules in the duel Seeker now "owns" Keyara

7) In the Same arena the next day Seeker fights Keyara (Testing scene) He trains her to be a warrior alongside her cleaning. After she was ambushed by people mad about Sonars death.

8) Seeker shows her the rooftop balcony and slowly she gets over her fear. Stockholm syndrome ensues.

9) Just as everything is going okay Sonar returns from the dead/ has enough power to affect the real world and destroys seekers searcher spiders. He knows about the past and has watched as they grew closer. He forces seeker to explain the truth and horrified Keyara runs away, when he catches up to her she full on fights him and tries to kill him, he has to retaliate.

10) He catches her and locks her away. In the darkness Sonar comes and asks her if she wants to be a demon again. She accepts and has a fever, because she is ill they release her. When she awakens she is full of power and meets Seeker once again in the dueling ground.

11)  They fight and she's about to kill him just like he killed Sonar but instead spares him like he spared her.

12) She released all the slaves and creates a great bridge so people can come and go as they please not being trapped, then she leaves.

Day 7143

Found these :3

Day 7132

Persephone used to live far away from the other deities, a goddess within Nature herself before the days of planting seeds and nurturing plants. In the Olympian telling, the gods Hermes and Apollo had wooed Persephone; but Demeter rejected all their gifts and hid her daughter away from the company of the Olympian deities.[68] The story of her abduction by Hades against her will, is traditionally referred to as the Rape of Persephone. It is mentioned briefly in Hesiod's Theogony,[69] and told in considerable detail in the Homeric Hymn to Demeter. Zeus, it is said, permitted Hades, who was in love with the beautiful Persephone, to carry her off as her mother Demeter was not likely to allow her daughter to go down to Hades. Persephone was gathering flowers with the Oceanids along with Artemisand Athena—the Homeric Hymn says—in a field when Hades came to abduct her, bursting through a cleft in the earth.[70] Demeter, when she found her daughter had disappeared, searched for her all over the earth with torches. In most versions she forbids the earth to produce, or she neglects the earth and in the depth of her despair she causes nothing to grow. Helios, the sun, who sees everything, eventually told Demeter what had happened and at length she discovered the place of her abode. Finally, Zeus, pressed by the cries of the hungry people and by the other deities who also heard their anguish, forced Hades to return Persephone.[71]
Hades indeed complied with the request, but first he tricked her, giving her some pomegranate seeds to eat. Persephone was released by Hermes, who had been sent to retrieve her, but because she had tasted food in the underworld, she was obliged to spend a third of each year (the winter months) there, and the remaining part of the year with the gods above.[72] With the later writers Ovid and Hyginus, Persephone's time in the underworld becomes half the year.[73]
In some versions, Ascalaphus informed the other deities that Persephone had eaten the pomegranate seeds. When Demeter and her daughter were reunited, the Earth flourished with vegetation and color, but for some months each year, when Persephone returned to the underworld, the earth once again became a barren realm. This is an origin story to explain the seasons.

Maya used to live far away from the other deities, a goddess within Nature herself before the days of planting seeds and nurturing plants. In the Olympian telling, the gods Tristan  had wooed Maya; but Rima rejected all their gifts and hid her daughter away from the company of the Olympian deities.[68] The story of her abduction by Leo against her will, is traditionally referred to as the Rape of Maya. Rui, it is said, permitted Leo, who was in love with the beautiful Maya, to carry her off as her mother Rima was not likely to allow her daughter to go down to Leo. Maya was gathering flowers with the Oceanids along with Artemisand Athena—the Homeric Hymn says—in a field when Leo came to abduct her, bursting through a cleft in the earth.[70] Rima, when she found her daughter had disappeared, searched for her all over the earth with torches. In most versions she forbids the earth to produce, or she neglects the earth and in the depth of her despair she causes nothing to grow. Jacque the sun, who sees everything, eventually told Rima what had happened and at length she discovered the place of her abode. Finally, Rui, pressed by the cries of the hungry people and by the other deities who also heard their anguish, forced Leo to return Maya[71]
Leo indeed complied with the request, but first he tricked her, giving her some pomegranate seeds to eat. Maya was released by Tristan, who had been sent to retrieve her, but because she had tasted food in the underworld, she was obliged to spend a third of each year (the winter months) there, and the remaining part of the year with the gods above.[72
In some versions, Lissette  informed the other deities that Maya had eaten the pomegranate seeds. When Rima and her daughter were reunited, the Earth flourished with vegetation and color, but for some months each year, when Maya returned to the underworld, the earth once again became a barren realm. This is an origin story to explain the seasons.

Maya lived far away, she was wooed by Tristan in her travels but rejects his affections in seeking to gain dragon ruling status.

When the emperor finds out that Maya is a girl he makes a deal with Leo and permits him to rule the kingdom if he takes Maya. The emperor arranges for a time when maya will be separated by giving her a quest that she must do alone to find a rare plant.

Leo comes to abduct her, bursting through a trap set for her and stealing her away to an underground cave (underground is unheard of in this city where everything goes up and up and up)

Upon not finding her, her companions search everywhere. Lissette happened to find out about the abduction but not wanting to be tied to Leo and seeing it as a good way for peace doesn't tell anyone. Jacque notices something wrong and presses for details but to no avail.

When Mayas dragon goes wild at her disappearance and starts destroying the city the emperor is forced to ask Leo to retrieve Maya.

Leo obliges but not before tricking her into a contract where she can go and save the city but she is then tied to him for 6 months of the year. // Lissette notices Mayas feelings for Leo and pressures them to stay together.   

Day 7128

Background story for Jaque/Lissette/Rima

Based on Aphrodite and Adonis

Aphrodite was Adonis' lover and a surrogate mother to him. Cinyras, the King of Cyprus, had an intoxicatingly beautiful daughter named Myrrha. When Myrrha's mother commits hubris against Aphrodite by claiming her daughter is more beautiful than the famed goddess, Myrrha is punished with a never-ending lust for her own father. Cinyras is repulsed by this, but Myrrha disguises herself as a prostitute, and secretly sleeps with her father at night.
Eventually, Myrrha becomes pregnant and is discovered by Cinyras. In a rage, he chases her out of the house with a knife. Myrrha flees from him, praying to the gods for mercy as she runs. The gods hear her plea, and change her into a myrrh tree so her father cannot kill her. Eventually, Cinyras takes his own life in an attempt to restore the family's honor.
Myrrha gives birth to a baby boy named Adonis. Aphrodite happens by the myrrh tree and, seeing him, takes pity on the infant. She places Adonis in a box, and takes him down to Hades so Persephone can care for him. Adonis grows into a strikingly handsome young man, and Aphrodite eventually returns for him. Persephone, however, is loath to give him up, and wishes Adonis would stay with her in the underworld. The two goddesses begin such a quarrel, Zeus is forced to intercede. He decrees that Adonis will spend a third of the year with Aphrodite, a third of the year with Persephone, and a third of the year with whomever he wishes. Adonis, of course, chooses Aphrodite.
Adonis begins his year on the earth with Aphrodite. One of his greatest passions is hunting, and although Aphrodite is not naturally a hunter, she takes up the sport just so she can be with him. They spend every waking hour with one another, and Aphrodite is enraptured with him. However, her anxiety begins to grow over her neglected duties, and she is forced to leave him for a short time. Before she leaves, she gives Adonis one warning: do not attack an animal which shows no fear. Adonis agrees to her advice, but, secretly doubting her skills as a huntress, quickly forgets her warning.
Not long after Aphrodite leaves, Adonis comes across an enormous wild boar, much larger than any he has ever seen. It is suggested that the boar is the god Ares, one of Aphrodite's lovers made jealous through her constant doting on Adonis. Although boars are dangerous and will charge a hunter if provoked, Adonis disregards Aphrodite's warning and pursues the giant creature. Soon, however, Adonis is the one being pursued; he is no match for the giant boar.
In the attack, Adonis is castrated by the boar, and dies from a loss of blood. Aphrodite rushes back to his side, but she is too late to save him and can only mourn over his body. Wherever Adonis' blood falls, Aphrodite causes anemones to grow in his memory. She vows that on the anniversary of his death, every year there will be a festival held in his honor.
On his death, Adonis goes back to the underworld, and Persephone is delighted to see him again. Eventually, Aphrodite realizes he is there, and rushes back to retrieve him. Again, she and Persephone bicker over who is allowed to keep Adonis until Zeus intervenes. This time, he says Adonis must spend six months with Aphrodite and six months with Persephone, the way it should have been in the first place.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aphrodite#Adonis

Lissette was Jacques lover and a surrogate mother to him. Cinyras, the King of Cyprus, had an intoxicatingly beautiful daughter named Rima. When Rima's mother commits hubris against Lissette by claiming her daughter is more beautiful than the famed goddess, Rima is punished with a never-ending lust for her own father. Cinyras is repulsed by this, but Rima disguises herself as a prostitute, and secretly sleeps with her father at night.Eventually, Rima becomes pregnant and is discovered by Cinyras. In a rage, he chases her out of the house with a knife. Rima flees from him, praying to the gods for mercy as she runs. The gods hear her plea, and change her into a myrrh tree so her father cannot kill her. Eventually, Cinyras takes his own life in an attempt to restore the family's honor.Rima gives birth to a baby boy named Tristan. Lissette happens by the myrrh tree and, seeing him, takes pity on the infant. She places Tristan in a box, and takes him down to Leo so Maya can care for him. Tristan grows into a strikingly handsome young man, and Lissette eventually returns for him. Maya, however, is loath to give him up, and wishes Tristan would stay with her in the underworld. The two goddesses begin such a quarrel, Rui is forced to intercede. She decrees that tristan will spend a third of the year with Lissette a third of the year with Maya, and a third of the year with whomever he wishes. Adonis, of course, chooses Lissette.Tristan begins his year on the earth with Lissette. One of his greatest passions is hunting, and although Lissette is not naturally a hunter, she takes up the sport just so she can be with him. They spend every waking hour with one another, and Lissette is enraptured with him. However, her anxiety begins to grow over her neglected duties, and she is forced to leave him for a short time. Before she leaves, she gives Tristan one warning: do not attack an animal which shows no fear. Adonis agrees to her advice, but, secretly doubting her skills as a huntress, quickly forgets her warning.Not long after Lissette leaves, Tristan comes across an enormous wild boar, much larger than any he has ever seen. It is suggested that the boar is the Jaque, one of Aphrodite's lovers made jealous through her constant doting on Tristan. Although boars are dangerous and will charge a hunter if provoked, Tristan disregards Lissette's warning and pursues the giant creature. Soon, however, Tristan is the one being pursued; he is no match for the giant boar.In the attack, Tristan is castrated by the boar, and dies from a loss of blood. Lissette rushes back to his side, but she is too late to save him and can only mourn over his body. Wherever Adonis' blood falls, Aphrodite causes anemones to grow in his memory. She vows that on the anniversary of his death, every year there will be a festival held in his honor.On his death, Tristan goes back to the underworld, and Maya is delighted to see him again. Eventually, Lissette realizes he is there, and rushes back to retrieve him. Again, she and Maya bicker over who is allowed to keep Adonis until Rui intervenes. This time, he says Tristan must spend six months with Maya and six months with Lissette, the way it should have been in the first place. 

Rima Revolutionist has a child of of marriage to an unknown man, from the city of Surmise a very backward thinking place at the pinnacle of rhythm.

Rima is resting under a tree, having been fighting to earn money for her son to eat (he's around 2 and has a tough build)  She gives her son away only so that he might have a better life and vows to change the world in turn. Thus she becomes the revolutionist.

Lissette's parents whilst traveling come accross the child, her mother is heavily pregnant and they choose to take him in as a bodyguard/servant of sorts. As he grows they realise his talent and encourage his inventive ways.

Jaque and Lissette make to escape from the kingdom as Lissette is forced to marry Leo, they become separated as Maya enters the story and Lissette warns him that Leo is more dangerous than he appears (having been threatened the night before on the balcony by him)

Jaque being the brillient inventor that he is when faced with Leo's mechanical dragon thinks he can escape, ignoring her warning. In the attack at first he is doing well but then suffers a critical hit. He is heavily wounded and dies from blood loss.

Where he died Lissette turns the place into a garden and vows to never love again.

Upon his death he is turned into a blank character. When Maya hears of this she breaks out the panels and tries to draw him back in but can't get it right. Many versions of him appear and they all combine into a ghost image, he tells Lissette he loves her but to move on, says his goodbyes and then lives inside one of the flowers.

Day 7101

http://www.madefire.com/ <- interactive comment here we come o.o


See how much work I can do today....  Until 8:20 pm

Go.

Day 7096

Look at that skype koala-tea ~o.o~

Animations going swimmingly...Ha...Ha...ha..... Tracing fish over and over again and it makes sense to me what I'm doing o.o but... It's tedious :< So I'm listening to another audiobook! By Brandon Sanderson, I seem to be listening to a lot of his books recently. Good author ^3^ 

Almost finished GW2 map o3o the rest is in WvW though :< So I'ma be changing servers a lot.

Tried going on twitter again o.o Really don't know what I'm doing on it..Aside from deleting early entries...

Comic planning :o

Universe = Ii atus ( Fingertips) 

10 planets in total
World that story takes place on = Ryuhm (Right thumb)

That's all I got o.o

+Isaacs spider idea o.o

Thing of today

I bought another rose :D I thought the first one was dead o.o but i think it's alive o3o and so now I have two white roses!!!! :D I love my first white rose most o.o

Casual selfie with my beautifuls o3o