Day 7050

http://www.purefm.com/on-air.html - 4-5 today

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Daily mugshots shall no doubt return once I have a video camera on the computer o.o... To amazon.


And the webcam is bought..... 3-5 days.


Ah I remember the heading I was going to write about was tea party.....


To be done when I get back. Today is first day of working as a cleaner at Langstone lets see how it goes :D

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So tired O.O Cleaning was okay... Feel I went pretty slowly though, and there is so much dust! Pretty tired now, was planning on getting some comic work done but I think I'm just have a nap to be honest...

10 - 2... Get home around 3.... Could bring spare clothes with me and work at uni?

Day 7049

3.15 

Place and Time
Ii atus , steam punk
Issue/2014+

Maya lives in the City of wings

The buildings are domed with pointed tops, and ridges running down the outsides looking much like cages.
A sea front city with large waterways passing through the place, so there are many stone bridges connecting everything so it's kinda floating.
Criminals would be put in cages that would hang out in the open for a certain amount of time depending on the crime.
It would be the center of trade and transport in its province, which is why  Jaque will be in the area traveling back home, may have him appear in chapter 2 as a bg chara the come into play chapter 3  :)

How the world came to be
I drew it into creation

What past events have shaped the way it is now 

The characters don't know of me, but each of my ... Like when I've changed my mind, it's already happened but then something unexplainable to the people happens and the world changes....

What rules are in place here?

- Science
Steampunk + Magic
- Society + Punishments

City of wings = Trading/Traveling society a place of rest and relaxation (though not laziness)
                     = Criminals no matter the crime are strung up in bird cages and hung above the city, the crime dictates the amount of time they are left in there for. 

What kind of government? 

Who has power and who doesn't? 

What do people believe in here?

What does this society value most?
This varies from city to city and is often explain in the cities name.

City of wings = freedom, to travel and move, innovation, but coming home to rest 
City of towers = Wealth and stability, to be better and higher than others so you can look down on them, or to build yourself up so you can not be looked down on.
  

What's the weather like?

Depends on my mood whilst drawing the comic panel

Where do the inhabitants  Live?

Where do the inhabitants  Work?

Where do the inhabitants Education?

What do they Eat?

What do they Play?

How do they treat their young?

How do they treat their old?

What relationships do they have with the animals?

What relationships do they have with the plants?

What do they animals look like?

What do the plants look like?

What kind of technology?
steam punk
What kind of transportation?

What kind of communication?

What kind of access to information?




How does this world shape the individuals that live in it?

What kind of  conflict is likely to emerge?

Day 7049

Summer

Education 

Need to find out if I have passed first year. I think I have o.o Perhaps not with flying colours but...Enough...

Feedback so far (just a compilation of them all)

"Good animatic with some simple yet effective animation. Your work has charm and humour.
Bit more effort needed next year…" 

"Your essay would have benefited from a level of formality and professionalism rather than your much too casual approach."
"Overall, we believe you have potential and we have seen sparks of it over the course of your first year. Your confidence has improved, and some of your animations show a natural flair for a sense of timing and fluid movement, but this is not consistent in all of your work. You seriously need to buckle down, work hard, focus and show us what you can do. Channel your skills and talent from now on. Use your time in university wisely and make better use of your peer and lecturer support. Practice more drawing, as we do not see enough evidence of this in your hand in."

"Life drawings – varied ability evident here. Some of the sketches produced during workshops are hard to view – pay more attention to presentation – submission is careless. Observation skills need developing – be careful with form structure and proportion and vary the use of line. Some of the life drawings show a sensitivity to weight and movement whilst others are clumsy. TB2 Taste animation tests are lovely and fluid however ‘sour’ is more ‘bitter’ – remember to consider how one colour responds to another to the whole and explore texture further. Sound tests – fluid use of line – consider colours responding to sound and explore colours out of other colours –out of light and dark – vary the tone. Colour mixing – some exercises produced but not all of them. Label other works. Check workshop diary – environment work missing. Don’t write ‘things’ on your submission. ‘Emotion’  - ‘evil’ reads well and ‘frantic’ shows a sense of your intention – be more adventurous with your mark-making and be more experimental with colour – consider how evil etc and then compare.  Attendance needs addressing if you want to improve. Overall the work does not show a real commitment which is disappointing as you clearly have ability. I hope you address this in preparation for L5." 

So notes for next year

• More effort - Commitment 
• Formal... Hmm maybe I can start selling myself as a brand? 
• Consistency, think this I'll be working on over summer 
• Draw more.... >.>..... <.<..... We shall see. 
• When drawing more... Work on varying the lines and getting a more accurate structure/proportion
• Clearly label all work... In a more formal way... Formality o.o Well then o.o
• Attendance

In summary so far...
Get better at drawing, present myself more formally, make sure everything is presented o.o

Moving out

I've left halls... Those last few days where so sad :< Everyone had gone.... So much stuff in the kitchen to clear out. My room also, so, so much stuff O.O insanity. I've unpacked now in the new house so o.o is all good, starting work on Monday and hoping to help out at bhf soon as well, they've had so many donations recently the upstairs is swamped in stuff that needs sorting.
Have also set up the new computer that was Toms computer :3 it's a beautiful thing. Now I just need a webcam and I'll have everything.
Plant is still alive....Just.

Sorry for poor quality o.o

Branding myself

In cold irons.... Um yes o.o
Start creating an online presence, make work I'm proud off and upload more regularly, get the comic under way and start the animations.

• Etsy 
• YouTube
• Deviant Art // Tumblr 
• Of course I will be blogging still
• Twitter? Facebook? 
• Instagram?
• Website - GoDaddy   83988205

Etsy wise I now have this o.o..... http://etsy.me/1u57tvE so you get £5 I get £5... You non existent people ;) 

We'll give each friend £5 toward their first Etsy purchase.
For every two friends who buy, you'll get £10 to spend yourself - up to £100.

I had another thing I wanted to talk about o.o But I forget... So have a random heading

and some random writing because why not o.o


Thing of today:

Day 7038

Day 7031

http://mundane-me.blogspot.co.uk/2015/08/day-7499.html - Updated chapter plans

1) she gets dragon and breaks arm

1. -World intro steam punk clock tower
2. - Happy setting Inn
3. -  She's asleep he's talking to some else, Intro to main character getting told off// Nicely asks her to finish something
4. - Cleaning see ladies talking, into to emperors quest 
5. - Tristan explain it to her, and tease her about never queen and also she'll express her want for power
6. - Night she has a moment where she looks to her parents photo..... Why did you leave me moment
7. - Wrenched out of bed - to be fed to the dragon 
8. - Standing with everyone else cue some bloody scenes with animals
9. - First person is about to be eaten Heroic act, completely fails, to prove the place they cut the arm off and give it to the dragon.
10. - Start to loose consciousness as blood pools around her 
11. - People start to panic more so, dragon gets uneasy starts fire everywhere
12. - Her body being dragged away into the shadows 

 2) she meets mechanic man 

1. Mechanical forest setting, show her inside of the tree glass tree, have a mechanical spider crawl over her arm and she goes to move it away 
2. Basic mechanical arm now shown, also chains, as she is inspecting it show shadow figure in background that comes into focus 
3. She goes to speak and he comes in close and pulls her shirt up around her throat . "Technically, the last thing I want to do is hurt you.... But it’s still on the list... So no talking now." Takes off glasses and cleans them on her collar 
4. She, looking over his shoulder and seeing skeletons and such headbuts him, he gets knocked out for a little bit, she grabs the keys and unlocks herself, and then chains him up
5. Starts looking round, finds books on anatomy, and mechanics and jars of human parts, and not so human parts, she also finds things on dragons, hands float over coins and then go towards a diary 
6. She is sitting in a chair drinking tea reading his diary when he wakes up,  and walks over to him "technically, the last this I want to do is hurt you...Again... But it's still on the list so uh.. start talking now or I'll spread all your secrets to everyone" (take it from the above text box//pull what he said down and scribble it out) he replies, "oh like you can read?"
7. "Yes,Jacque" I can "So do most people in this world, not everyone just skims through life looking at pictures" (look at reader raising an eye brow her back to him he is undoing himself using the mechanical spiders,  "technically a nice cup of tea would make this a little easier, yes?" Says the Mechanic as he rubs his hands   
8. (Why did I turn away) internal thoughts of Maya mouth slightly open as she turns around.

3) She gets her arm fixed, the french story is introduced and eye candy enters the party
 4) they decide to rob a train and the gun girl enters the story
5) There is a house that burns and peoples ties are put to strain
 6) she is in a market and has a conflict with the prince
 7) She reaches the kingdom everything is almost going to plan

8) The king puts trials in her way - Spiders (Isaac) Giant fury mountain, assumed to be moss, they touch it and it's just tons and tons and fricken tons of spiders. Inside is boss rock spider who has a silk armour thing they need to get for the king. or dress oor yes...

^ inspirational awfulness

9) The characters start to fall for the wrong people
 10) The dragon almost kills everyone
11) ending part 1
12) ending part 2 o.o


Mecahincal - cheesy witt, mild psychopath, intelligent

• Some people hear voices.. Some see invisible people.. Others have no imagination whatsoeve
• I like work. It fascinates me. I sit and look at it for hour
• When tempted to fight fire with fire, remember that the Fire Department usually uses water.
• Just about the time when you think you can make ends meet, somebody moves the ends
• The best way to lie is to tell the truth, carefully edited truth.
• Do not argue with an idiot. He will drag you down to his level and beat you with experience.
• The last thing I want to do is hurt you. But it’s still on the list
• Knowledge is knowing a tomato is a fruit; Wisdom is not putting it in a fruit salad.
• Better to remain silent and be thought a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
• Liquor makes me happy, you….not so much.
• If Plan A doesn’t work, the alphabet has 25 more letters. Keep calm
• As you’re reading this, you should say to yourself, “Why am I talking to myself?”
• Today is one of those days where I wish I could restore myself to the factory settings.
• Alcohol kills brain cells. But naturally, it attacks the slowest and weakest brain cells first. In this way, regular consumption of beer eliminates the weaker brain cells, making the brain a faster and more efficient machine.
• I read somewhere that when someone is about to quote a bogus fact or statistic that they preface it by saying, “I read somewhere.
• I have six locks on my door all in a row. When I go out, I lock every other one. I figure no matter how long somebody stands there picking the locks, they are always locking three.

http://thoughtcatalog.com/darren-johnson/2014/07/25-witty-comebacks-to-use-on-terrible-pick-up-lines/

Day 7031

And who are you, the proud lord said,

that I must bow so low?

Only a cat of a different coat,

that's all the truth I know.

In a coat of gold or a coat of red,

a lion still has claws,

And mine are long and sharp, my lord,

as long and sharp as yours.

And so he spoke, and so he spoke,

that lord of Castamere,

But now the rains weep o'er his hall,

with no one there to hear.

Yes now the rains weep o'er his hall,

and not a soul to hear.

Two men, raises a hand and casually points to another man

slinks down low going around the back of the first man sarcastic laughing 

First man slowly turns 

leans and leers towards first man

gold coins fall down inside his body he turns around and as he moves they swirl into blood liquid

Claws rip down the screen into sections

Swishs in and outof the rips,Lord loses sight of him and is looking around

Appears behind him, cuts his throat all fades into a mist

As mist fades ruins starts to form
mist to vanishes
just darkness
darkness
Mouth slowly forms
speaking words to black

Just the first minute 

17/7/14 Update ^

Day 7020

Would like to do

• 2 days http://www.onlinevideocontests.com/contest/6431 Enviromental video - A really beautiful world all made of plastic, kinda a lake/forest glade with flowers and such. Zooms out to a real world that is in ruin, with plastic waste blowing in the breeze.
• 22days https://www.projected.com/contests/40-beware-the-jabberwock?utm_source=OVC&utm_medium=Ads&utm_campaign=Beware_the_Jabberwock Jabberwocky video - Someone speaking the poem, and slowly they turn into the jabberwocky and the background becomes more animated and yes o.o this would be so fun o3o
• 390 days till May expo. Comic, art, ect. 
• Jelsa animation 
• TtR Episode 1

Need to do

• 4 days to get all of narrative done :< So screwed ha.ha.ha.....
• 27 days Tea party Party in the park 
• 49 days Tedx? Through the looking glass opening. 

Also need to

• Find house for over summer 

1. http://www.portsmouthstudentpad.co.uk/Advert/5561683 £130 pm 07761 087421
2. http://www.portsmouthstudentpad.co.uk/Advert/5551981 £169 pm 07980661431 - Water+Sewerage covered 
3. http://www.portsmouthstudentpad.co.uk/Advert/5562057 £173 pm 01329 510969  - Rent includes all ( but no enquire button )

• Move most things back home
• Grandpa birthday thing 

1. Showcase cinema ticket
2. Ginger biscuits 
3. Drawing

- Wine, spilling onto a boat

- Evolution of man style - Evolution of his life